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Tuesday, October 23, 2018

summer

2 comments:

  1. Bonjour Journey,
    The boiling sunbeams - wow. I really like this image it makes in my head. Do you find sand always gets in your fish and chips at the beach?
    Mrs Krausse

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  2. Hi journey Its samara,
    I love your descriptive writting.
    next time maybe you could use a more catchy and unique title.
    great job journey

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