Sweet sweet watermelon!
“Mmmm” the sweet sweet smell of summer filled my nostrils. The look of the
red juicy flesh upset my stomach i really wanted to bite into the wonderful
watermelon. On the count of three we will take a bite “ 1,2,3”.
watermelon. On the count of three we will take a bite “ 1,2,3”.
Crunch, slurpp. The delightful fruit smothered my taste-buds. The taste was like
summer but it was Winter. I could feel the juicy watermelon juice trickle down
my throat. In my mouth there was a sudden world war 3, all the pips in my
mouth where slamming into each other like someone had said something.
“ did,did,did.did” I spat them all out into the bin.
summer but it was Winter. I could feel the juicy watermelon juice trickle down
my throat. In my mouth there was a sudden world war 3, all the pips in my
mouth where slamming into each other like someone had said something.
“ did,did,did.did” I spat them all out into the bin.
It was getting a bit squishy and it started to sound like “squish” that was
the sound that I could hear when I crunched down on the oval fruit with my
teeth. i ate it down hoping I wouldn't start world 4. The watermelon was as
crunchy as a block of Chocolate. As I finished the fruit all I could see was
a yuck lime green rind. I thought to myself is there anymore?
BY JOURNEY!
the sound that I could hear when I crunched down on the oval fruit with my
teeth. i ate it down hoping I wouldn't start world 4. The watermelon was as
crunchy as a block of Chocolate. As I finished the fruit all I could see was
a yuck lime green rind. I thought to myself is there anymore?
BY JOURNEY!
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| This is my writing about the water melon that we ate in week ten. i really like the way i added interesting words next time i would like to add more smiles. |
Tumeke Journey! Awesome description. I feel like a watermelon now lol
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